Firstly, thank you for the paper.
There are a few things to revise please.
1) Kindly please chevk the grammar and construction of the sentences as there are a few mistakes.
Ive stated a few below but i would appreciate if you could kindly read through the whole proposal paper please.
2) That this is a proposal, not a paper as you’ve stated ‘paper’ a few times.
3) PG 6 “…..and the employess will be safer in the hands of the doctors operating in that particular healthcare facility.”
I think there is an error there….kindly please check.
4) Pg 7 2nd paragraph…
I think you are trying to mention the consequences of dealing with the courts and law if caught for negligence?
But the way its phrased needs to be reviewed please.
Please address to sacred heart i nstead of general health organization please as its a proposal for Sacred Heart Hospital.
Kindly refer to the files i sent you.
6) Kindly check that the citations are in APA and all the references stated are used.
(Ive not checked that)
Please do not think i appreciate your work as i do. Just a few things to revise.
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